TKR - Mirror of The Reality

[PLEASE FULL VIEW!!] *begging*
hihi~!
this is for the 's contest (Rain & Noir). I wish one day I would be as good as her T.T shes me idol, hehe~
I did feel good about this pic at first. but now... I don't think its going so good anymore. maybe its because I stared at it too long, im starting to hate it... I really doubt at I'm going to win, but all in all... I had fun drawing it^____________^ but I wanna win so bad >< nyaaa. heres the line-art I did for it, if any of you guy wanna see ----> [link]
what I find really odd is... people like the ones I hate and the ones I like... they dont like. :/
I love you guys and please comment T.T nyaaa....
I added the patterns cause, its looks pretty^^ or im just lazy T.T
I got the pretty patterns here ---> [link]
--tools used--
My small 3X4 tablet
lineart: Pentool
Color: Photoshop CS2


Rain/Nair (c) *Kaze-Hime
Art (c) ~Ayasal (me)